Beat show

[fatdan]

yo looking for harsh feed back on my beatz tell me what you think

ps: tito you almost finsh

zSHARE - fatdancaptain.mp3
zSHARE - fatdanmee.mp3
zSHARE - fatdansurpise.mp3

[((DJ Nialistik))]

yo wutup gee
so for starters
i think the first 2
beats jump around too much
and the drums dont work too well with the samples
but on the third beat, surprise,
i caught myself bobbing my head
but only at the begining since
it got a lil crazy in the middle
none the less just keep on it and your
bound to find a system that works best for you
its all about experimenting, so try tweaking the samples
whether you stretch em add reverb etc...
hope some of that helps out!
ps. wut do you use to make your beats?

[fatdan]

yo man fl studio on my joints

[archdukezeb]

Not bad I think your samples sound a little to fitered and the beats a little to syncopated. Some hi hats woud really help your tracks so they don't sound like they're constantly starting and stopping so much and for the samples use more than just one bar or even less than that. Your beats feel like they have no melody to them because the samples you use only have like 3 notes in them. When I'm listening to it I keep waiting for it to break out into something else but it just keeps repeating and stuttering. Take a look at some Dj premier instrumentals and see how he does 2 bar loops. I hope I don't sound to discouraging I liked the sound on your third beat, reminds me of Daft Punk. Just keep at it and I think you improve your beats.

[DASPECIALIST]

on the fatdancaptain joint some of the drum hits are a little to gritty, not that gritty it is bad, but I think if you add a bassline it will all balance out, other than that the track could be a hype joint

the second joint was not so pleasing to the ears I think it was too repetitious not enough melody

and dat 3rd joint, dat shit is dope I feel dat

all around I think you should try to fuck wit some basslines, and I dont know if you just sample all your melody or play or do both, really doesn't make a difference but try to mess wit all little more melody sometimes, but if thats just your style if feel u