the first one is very sleek, the sounds you used have good atmospherics. not sure how much i like the little james brown snippets, they seem a bit out of place, i'd rather just let your darker beat ride. my favorite part of it would have to be that subtle orchestra trembling.
the second one is simpler, sounds like a beat for a menacing slow driving scene, or an interlude. i like the tambourine sound. the beat doesn't flow quite as good as the first one, but it definitely has feeling.
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