I prefer the second one by a long way, apart from the chipmunk chorus. It's got that contemporary sampled vibe, and I like the change ups in it. All I would say, is often when samples like that are sped up, a lot of vibe is lost IMO. I'd also say the the drum programming sounds a bit drum machine-ish, and needs a bit more groove and swing going on. Nice to hear some cuts going on though and I like your MC.
The first track didn't do it so much for me though, just didn't have that bump it needed. Also the hook sounded a bit uninspired to me, and kind of nauseating.
I hope this criticism is taken as constructive,
peace.
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